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Re: how many novels do you own?
Oh gosh. I think I have >100. No less. (: My book shelves are so full that I just throw my books all over my bed. Yeah... messy bed.
Jul 18, 2009 -
Re: With You
Oh I really like it too. You have a good singing voice and I have to agree with Dark Eyed Pixie, the lyrics are very nice. :) -- Miss Ching
Jul 15, 2009 -
Re: Princess Jade
Hello sparrowrules! I want to say that your story seems like a children's story. If that's what you're going for then that's really great! But anyway, the reason I think ...
Jul 5, 2009 -
Re: Rant On Shopaholics
Hi Fearless! First off, I'd like to say that this really all belongs in a blog. :) This forum is for sharing your works, not your rants. (sorry if I ...
Jul 3, 2009 -
Re: Harriet
Nice poem! At first I thought, like most everybody else, that you were talking about a person. I thought maybe your sister. But no, it was a chicken! It was ...
Jun 26, 2009 -
Re: Oranges
Wow I loved your poem! You made a poem about a fruit so interesting and fun! One thing: Shining like an afternoon sun The orange brings a feeling of light ...
Jun 25, 2009 -
Re: Daddy?
Hello. I've first got to say that from the title of the poem and the rating, I thought this was another poem about rape so I avoided it for a ...
Jun 25, 2009 -
Re: Completely Idiotic
There once was a lollipop that changed colours everyday. One day he was red. Then the next day he was blue. Then the next day he was yellow. Then the ...
Jun 25, 2009 -
Re: Memory Lane
Memory Lane I was strolling down, Memory Lane, When a voilent wave, Washed everything away, Until, All those memories, Just seemed like, Dreams; So far away. Then I realized, That ...
Jun 25, 2009 -
Re: Phantasm:Prologue and Chapter one (Part one)
Hi! You have a really interesting story. You kept me reading 'till the end and not many stories can do that. I'm a naturally lazy person so if there isn't ...
Jun 24, 2009 -
Re: A fairy tale
Hey Saily! I really like your poem! It's so creative and thoughtful. The part where the girl compared herself to "her" really blew me away. Just a few things though. ...
Jun 21, 2009 -
Re: Oddities under an Office Block (Edited)
Hi Cotton! You've got a really interesting story here. The imagery in the story really helps the reader understand every part of your story better. I love your adjectives! Great ...
Jun 21, 2009 -
Re: Dreams Really Do Come True…Kinda
Hey! I thought your story was really creative what with the "Lin Snow" and "Charles Prince" haha. But the setting of the story is somewhat confusing. I think, though, that ...
Jun 21, 2009 -
Re: Carnelian
Hi! I just gotta say that this really is great. The descriptiveness of everything helps with the entirely captivating storyline. It was really enjoyable to read and your thorough knowledge ...
Jun 21, 2009 -
Re: Her Daughter's Heartbreak.
I really like the perspective from which this poem is written in. It's a real eye opener to what our parents might feel as we grow out of their reach. ...
Jun 20, 2009
